All Comments on 'First Contact'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Great story :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep it going!

The anticipation of page 2 didn't come! Keep it going! Great story so far!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hmmmmm........................

......, if they don't get 'it on', SOON, then I'd say his neighbor is a "Prick Teaser"!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Oh yes baby

Kep writing, don't leave us hanging. Please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
too sexy for my shirt

Damn... I wish Brad was here to give me a rubdown like that!

DJHyrrikhayneDJHyrrikhayneover 19 years ago
Once again...

a great story, with a curveball twist at the end. Although I do hope they get it on at some point!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

It brought back a memory of 40 years ago. My erection was almost as strong as Brad's just thinking about it.

steamyseductresssteamyseductressover 14 years ago
FEEL FREE TO FINISH

Good story so far, but let them DO IT!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ending to abrupt

Nicely written, but ends more like it is Chapter 1 of a longer story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
BOOBS, LEGS & BACK

Nice story - ending was just right and no doubt the story have another chapter with the older woman giving the virgin boy his first. Even chapter three and four where he nails the daughters.

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