All Comments on 'First Crush'

Great story. Write more.

Good first story, takes me back to steps not taken, and always regretted.

The backstory, dialogue, and sex were all written fantastically. Awesome first story.

Awesome sexy story! My 90 year old cock is hard as an elephants! It's a fucking battering ram!

So sexy much wow many boner

This story is well-written, with excellent characters and a well-paced plot. However, it could just as easily been placed in the Romance category, as the romantic atmosphere pervades the entire story. This excellent story also needs a sequel.