All Comments on 'First Crush'

by moondreamer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
This story if the fucking bomb

Please do more stories I love them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow

This story had me so hot.I think watching gay men is a big turn on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Mmmm =)

I love watching 2 men, its in alot of my fantasies, I thank you for doing such a good job of writing this =)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Incredibly hot

This piece was amazing... really really hot. One of the best I've read in ages. I'm gonna go look and see if you have any other submissions!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more...

please? would love to see if they can make it as a couple. i think they have a good base started. could make a good hot love story.

WittePietWittePietabout 9 years ago
Excellent story

You could write a sequel. That would be good.

swimguy33swimguy33almost 9 years ago
I agree.....

....with the comment that this story could be further developed. You've done a great job. I was hard (still am) the entire time and I found that I truly cared about the characters, and would love to read more about their growing relationship. Well done! And thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Whow, "I knew I had to go before I raped him right there", what the fuck? This story really is a product of its time. Does not stand up at all.

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