by moondreamer
I love watching 2 men, its in alot of my fantasies, I thank you for doing such a good job of writing this =)
This piece was amazing... really really hot. One of the best I've read in ages. I'm gonna go look and see if you have any other submissions!
please? would love to see if they can make it as a couple. i think they have a good base started. could make a good hot love story.
....with the comment that this story could be further developed. You've done a great job. I was hard (still am) the entire time and I found that I truly cared about the characters, and would love to read more about their growing relationship. Well done! And thank you!
Whow, "I knew I had to go before I raped him right there", what the fuck? This story really is a product of its time. Does not stand up at all.