All Comments on 'First Dance'

I have never given a comment before, and let me tell you— i loved this story. i loved everything about it. i loved that it was implied that he took her virginity, and the fact that you took the time to let him finger her, and it hurt her (as it should relatively). this is definitely my favorite read of all time, i love the sappy-ness and the romance and the long wait— bravo!

Spoiled by the condom.

Him cumming deep up inside her pussy reads much better

This is story land no VD or babies here

Continue this beautiful story!!!!

I hate condoms. A sequel at the hotel will be great!

Oh my god. This fucking blew my mind