All Comments on 'First Date'

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Blackrabbit711Blackrabbit711almost 10 years ago
First Date

Great read and very hot, loved the intensity. Hope there is more to come.

I have a story with the same title!! Hope you check it out as there is also a restaurant scene!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
holy moly

If THAT was a first date, where do they go from here? I could not be so brave. Glad to see her set such an important limit at the start. Laughed at the manager coming to check on them. Must have been an interesting kitchen conversation.

marzipanmousemarzipanmouseover 11 years ago
More!

I mean, um.. more please, ma'am? That was fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Yup!

For a first date that was Fantastic <3

thischickthischickabout 13 years ago

I read this with my mouth open. What a great idea. Making this a favorite.

cyberlarkcyberlarkabout 13 years ago

positively delicious.

estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Good Stuff

Hot and kinky.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Love this, just wish you'd added in the spanking.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 13 years ago
So delicate, so spare

Almost perfect, a few spelling mistakes apart.

You got 5. Thank you for writing.

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