All Comments on 'First Encounter'

You need to write more stories! Thanks for sharing this one!

It's sitting not sat for the adverb. Story was good but irritating to keep running into wrong usage. Distracts from the mood.

Lesbian stories are not my usual reads. But this was absolutely perfect!

MORE, please.

That was a wonderful story. Love your style. Thank you

Love this story! The way you drew it out to build the characters was a refreshing change from most of the stories on here. The sex was awesome and we'll paced. A wonderful hot delight to read. Please submit more and thanks for sharing!

Eric

Loved this story! I surely hope you continue. The emotions were expressed very well. Really makes you feel you actually are there. Very well done. Will definitely be looking forward for more from you.

SB

I loved the slow build up! Always nice to have genuine emotions between the characters instead of just sex. And speaking of the sex it was super hot! 🙂

Wow, very good story. I loved the slow buildup and character development. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Wow,

What a great story. Nice buildup en great storyline.

I like to read more of what is happening between Elena en Piper.

That has to be some of the best descriptive writing I have ever had the pleaaure of reading. Absolutely superb.

the sexual tension between elena and Piper was palpable - from cinema to bedroom. a story that keeps you second-guessing throughout is rare - even now, I'm uncertain as to Piper's needs vs. elena's more obvious ones. yesss, there are sexual needs but there's also an undercurrent playing just beneath the surface... after all, elena remains somewhat in the dark regarding Piper - not that elena is complaining at the moment... and rightly so ;) beautifully written with no recall of verb abuse when the action verbs commanded the scenes and content :) thank you very MUCH for sharing!

erotic, sweet and tender...Do it again please...:)

Welcome to Literotica. Thank you for this excellent story. Hope you will treat us with more stories.

Incredible story!! So sweet and so sexy omigosh

Good story. Very slow build and cute and sexy. I hope you are ok . And hope you write more please. Don’t stop. Thank you

sweet, sexy and sublime

Lovely story, so vivid and well told.

O.M.G. just a masterful job.