All Comments on 'First Explorations'

This is a good start. Add more chapters and don't be in too much of a hurry to the end. foreplay, anticipation, progress and regresses all are as important in a story like this as the final fucking.

and I will have it.

Expanding the story would please your readers.!

I liked it, it was very erotic in how relatively tame it was. My only criticism is that I think it needs more dialogue and that I'd definitely like to know the boy's name, would make it more real to me.