All Comments on 'First Immortals Ch. 09'

The ending of this chapter was a little abtupt. Great other wise.

Serves em right

Keep it coming, enjoying this story immensely.

I keep an eye out on new updates and am always glad when I see one. This one is really good. I loved how he put the screws to the "rulers". A little guy finally gets heard and listened to as well.

I Love the Law and order backhand there!

Is that it.?

Great story so far.

Next chapter please.

Great story, but it can't be finished!

Hi everyone, I have had some dramas getting time to come back to this but it is definitely not finished. Please be patient. Thanks for all the great feedback, it is appreciated. BB1212

Please continue, can't wait to see where this goes!

That was freakin' awesome. You could have ended the story right there and I'd have been satisfied!