All Comments on 'First Kiss'

What an amazing story. I could really identify with the female character. Keep these good stories coming.

Sweet and sexy. :)

I was very pleasantly surprised when I read your story. It was very good. Keep it up. jt. I mean the writing. M(v)

jt jt jt... that was so sweet ! I loved it ! AND I want some of that 'masturbatory intimacy'...wow... keep givin us our thrills ....you little fucker....I am goin to the shower and you get your 'masturbatory intimancy havin butt' over here NOW !

TX gives you a 10 !

Great story JT.. It really it home with me as there was a girl named Joanie my freshman year in HS that I was head over heels in love with. We were inseperable and best friends but she moved to Atlanta at the end of the school year and I've haven't seen her since then. The last time I saw her was when I hugged and kissed her the day she left.

I love it freshhhhhhhhhhh wow hot stuff!!!mmmmmmm.......smiling.I look forward to your next story!!

this is a wondefully well written story of friendship and love. the story progresses nicely to the incredibley erotic sex scene by the rainy lagoon, which just makes to whole thing so sensual.

would love to see more written about this pair.

great story JT...more please

I vaguely remember being in this same situation.....ty JT excellent story.

Sexyjessie

I like this story for a number of reasons. I find it is well written; it held my attention, has vivid imagery, and realistic characters and storyline. I also like it because it is both touchingly romantic as well as erotic. Very nice, Jt.

~Squid

My favorite so far :)

JT you really knowq how to describe the scene. I loved it. Thanks, keep up the wonderful writing,wow I'm very turned on now!!!!Thanks again

I love the story, well written , sweet and the details all wrap it up nicely, sweet tender romantic love story ! nice!

Fabulous and tantalizing. I get all worked up when I read this story. Can't wait for the next one.

Saraya

Can you type more of this story?? What happens next?? I'm so excited :D