All Comments on 'First Kiss Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Another story

About retarded people.

Not erotic, not even a story.

Change your name, it's wrong.

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AtavistAtavistover 10 years ago
Great one

Already three favorites, and I'm gonna make one more. Can't believe it's just chapter one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Gods! How do you manage to keep the teasing thing so fresh?! Fuuuuck this is good, just so brilliantly spun! More info into Max's viewpoint would be nice but you have to write more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

loved it...and bonus, good english!

Sman4444Sman444411 months ago

Great story - great reluctance!!

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When you send an email enter an email address for a reply. I will often write a story by request. You will find more of my stories on Smashwords, by Gary Bingham Thank you to all on Literotica for the opportunity to publish stories and for readers comments as that has improv...

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