All Comments on 'First Love'

Somewhat happy resolution of a sad situation!

5

Seemed like a good story.

A bit rushed though, with some loose ends.

What happened with the daughter?

Cheers

Nice. Would have like the end to be elaborated more than what it is now, which appears as a hurried attempt. But then, that's just me - someone who has dreams of the " life after " for movie characters after I watch a movie and go to bed . Lol

Too much drama, packed in seemingly at the last minute, with a lot of details (probably unnecessary ones) left out. It could have been far simpler as long-lost lovers reconnecting, but you had to turn it into a soap opera instead.

Good idea, but hardly any character development, plus the timescale and ending were rushed, it feels like the author either wrote this grudgingly for someone or fell out of love with this story, sorry CMM not your best work. Please keep writing tho! DG UK.

Great story s usual!!!!

I like the story a lot. Is chapter 2 in the offering. It would be nice to see how it all ends. AAAAA++++

I thoroughly enjoyed it , very well written

Entertaining as usual.

Burninglove

Not really up to standard. The forced ending leaves a lot to be dealt with.

Won't grade it as it's not properly finished.

Rushed,lousy ending! So how exactly did things end? No clues here!