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Click here"So the call I received from my daughter pleading with me to come home was part of his scheme to get me back?"
"That seems to be a likely scenario, yes."
"I don't believe that anyone could sink as low as to include his own daughter in this scheme. I know he can be controlling, but this?"
"If your daughter has made a report that has led to a misuse of police resources in following up of that report, she can be in big trouble."
"I don't blame her, she would have been forced to make that call to me."
"Be that as it may, we will follow up on this." They left us.
"I have one final call to make and then I'm done with that part of my life for good." She rang Andrea. "Andrea, if your father forced you to tell me that fanciful tale of his being found in a river to get me to come home, I suggest that you distance yourself from him because the police are investigating the whole matter." She disconnected her previous life.
I took her in my arms and held her while she released her emotions. Some time later she lifted her head from my chest and looked at me. "Thank you for being you. I love you so much. Kiss me please."
Not really up to standard. The forced ending leaves a lot to be dealt with.
Won't grade it as it's not properly finished.
I like the story a lot. Is chapter 2 in the offering. It would be nice to see how it all ends. AAAAA++++
Good idea, but hardly any character development, plus the timescale and ending were rushed, it feels like the author either wrote this grudgingly for someone or fell out of love with this story, sorry CMM not your best work. Please keep writing tho! DG UK.
Too much drama, packed in seemingly at the last minute, with a lot of details (probably unnecessary ones) left out. It could have been far simpler as long-lost lovers reconnecting, but you had to turn it into a soap opera instead.
Nice. Would have like the end to be elaborated more than what it is now, which appears as a hurried attempt. But then, that's just me - someone who has dreams of the " life after " for movie characters after I watch a movie and go to bed . Lol
Seemed like a good story.
A bit rushed though, with some loose ends.
What happened with the daughter?
Cheers