All Comments on 'First Love Hopeful Ch. 01'

Loved It. Please continue. You have a good premise and I want to know what will happen next with your characters.

Ohhhh She's So Busted - But I Believe That She'll "CUM" Clean & Honest & Things Will Work Out. After All It's "Their" First Date & Soemtimes Things Happen.

I LOVE IT ! Please Continue

Kathy

I really enjoyed the story - hope it hasn't been abandoned!

This was as close to perfect as anything here can be. Your sex is powerful, dominating, the way you had her on your sofa, then when you carried the young woman into your bedroom, I was hooked and I wanted her to be me. I wanted to read so much what you did the next day as instead part of what you did once you put her down on your bed... It was so hot I had to come before reading onward.

You've got to write a sequel. Please. For me.

Climatic...I was biting my nails until the end. Where's part two?!