All Comments on 'First Meeting Ch. 01'

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lust_4_ulust_4_uover 16 years ago
great job!

Very well done! I think any of us who have chatted online can relate to this story. I loved the reality of it - I could feel and see it happening. Just enough emotion and detail to draw me in and yet let my mind wander to the possibilities. Thanks for sharing and I cannot wait for the continuation!

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BabyBlue2005BabyBlue2005over 16 years ago
Loved It

Lots of tender passion and tons of good detail. Well done!

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