All Comments on 'First Night'

Great job. I hope you will continue the story!!

This has been my favorite story I've read on the site. I'm so ready to get off after reading it. I'll definitely be fantasizing about it later...

Ithink I love you........Definately some of the best long story writing.....

What a great story!! Definitely look forward to future stories!!

My girlfriend is also territorial and insecure. Definitely can relate to this story. Add more chapters please!

I love it when hubby licks my ass, fingers and fucks it. I felt like I was reading one of our encounters (without the third party).

Lovely when I can get a nice story along with a good command of the English language.

KUTGW; will wait not-so-patiently for more!

Great writing, and a great story! Encore!

I really enjoyed thisit kept my interest6 and my horn all the way through

Great story and good writing. Kept my attention all the way through.

I could not help it, but it made me so wet and horny i needed to touch my self *blushing* i cum 3 times..

I love your story..

Wickedly good. Please keep writing. What a fantastic debut.

I loved it, I was sooo wet, I attacked my hubby when he got home from work! Thanks keep it up n your stories too. Lol!!

Hot as hell!

Enjoyed the fact that you extend the descriptions of good old sex to paragraphs and pages instead of just sentences.

It seems you leave the narrative poised to be extended further. I hope you do so.