All Comments on 'First Night'

This was simply beautiful and raw. Mmmmmmm thank you!

I'm reading all your stories in the order you entered them here on Literotica. So far, this one is my favorite, followed by Snowed In.

This one seems much more intense and ultimately more gratifying. You're captured the sweetest of descriptions I can imagine reading, Marie.

But I'm betting there's more where this one came from, and I aim to find out!! T Love =)

I really enjoy stories about people being happy with each other - just gentle, loving affection. So many people write the other kind, it gets discouraging some times.

I hope you come back with more!