All Comments on 'First Porn Shop Visit'

Mostly believable, although veering into "suspension of disbelief" fantasy territory in the strip club. Rich in details, and a skillful job of teasing us along to the ultimate climax we knew was coming. Well written and very erotic.

Okay, the story was well-written and deserves praise for that. But of the four pages, three were devoted mainly to straight sex and lesbian sex does not involve men. Maybe 'Erotic Couplings' would have been more appropriate.

Well written, well done! Left me wet and wanting!

Fantastic. You made me feel like I was with you.

This was outstanding. My trips to strip clubs have been ok but never really got me going. This story i related to paul and would have really enjoyed a dance like Whitley. Bravo!!!!

Very Hot story, and well written.

Can't imagine that you two never saw each other again, if only to thank Eve for the thorough introduction to girl on girl fun ;->