All Comments on 'First Steps'

by theo_minor

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Chiara23Chiara23almost 13 years ago

Well written and very refreshing. It's nice to see a well plotted story with believable characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
realistic

Very refreshing to read a story that is believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
No title

Very good story. Man I need to stop reading this stuff.

movermoveralmost 13 years ago
LOVERLY

Beautiful story well told. There is nothing like a love story, and this was a very good one. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Bet this wouldn't've happened if you'd lived with *my* stepsister...

:-D

Seriously -- thank you for a very well-written story! Looking forward to your future contributions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Well written romantic and erotic

Thank you for taking the time to write so well.

woody1230woody1230almost 13 years ago

there is no law. go for it and continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
YES

I like a story where the principles care about and respect each other and love grows at the same time as sexuality.

It is a delight to find an author who writes such stories, and does it so well.

Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

wonderful story , one of the best that have read so far .

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Natural

What an enjoyable story and realistic as well.

Keep it up and don't ever stop.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
GREAT

Second part

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Yes it's legal

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story, but it needs a sequel.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

What a great story, I agree with Anonymous it definitely needs a sequel. Well Done 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Yes, it is legal. They are not blood relatives.

šŸ‘šŸ‘!

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A few of my stories are absolutely real. A few of them are pure fantasy. Most of them are a mix of reality and fantasy. I'll leave it to my readers to decide which is which. . . And as I write my stories, I presume that my readers understand, as I do, that much, maybe ev...