All Comments on 'First Steps Ch. 01: A Trip to Heaven'
by kneeling_lisa
- 27 Comments
cudsnuggleatover 5 years agoI feel so happy reading this in the Philippines, South Pacific
You don't know how much JOY I feel.
Thank you. Keep on writing from your heart, your fabulous heart!!
gapster7 and Jake: the magnificent helpers . . .
Anonymousover 5 years agoReally good, very much looking forward to more chapters. Well written and very sexy
Maddie624over 5 years agoDamn...that was one hell of a chapter! Can't wait to see where you take this and whether or not Jing has anything to say about it :)
Anonymousover 5 years agoYour excellent descriptive writing brought this sensual story to life. It forced me to read sentence after sentence as if Hannah herself were on top of my face. I, too, had to wipe of the juices when I reached the end.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI'm a senior citizen from far away. India. I've been bisexual since about 35 when I was invited to join my work mate for a 3 some with his sexy wife. I was straight till then but had no problem taking his cum covered cock into my mouth after he had cum inside her juicy pussy right after I'd finished cumming in her. We still enjoy getting to gether but not so easy with granchildren joining in to prevent our shenanigans.
This is such a juicy story, I can't wait for the next section. Please hurry Lisa.
LeavesOfGover 5 years agoYour story pulls the reader along a journey of self discovery in a highly engaging manner. I look forward to reading future chapters.
kneeling_lisaover 5 years agoAuthorThank you everyone for your lovely comments. It has been so encouraging to see people enjoy my writing, I was so nervous when I posted it.
I am currently writing part two and hope you will all continue reading the coming chapters. In the next one Emily will be introduced to submission, so I will be posting it in the BDSM section, please check there or follow me for the rest of the story. I have a fair bit planned for the future, we have not seen the last of any of the characters. I hope you will enjoy the journey.
Thank you again.
Anonymousover 5 years agoPlease hurry up with the next chapters, I can hardly wait to find out more about her sexual awakenig!!! You did a great job in chapter 1, I truly enjoyed reading it!!
Lady_Sover 5 years agoReally loved your story and would surely look forward to the next chapter eagerly. Very, very amorous.
You deserve a five.
fishingrod48about 5 years agoWhat a great start please write the next chapter soon. Five stars is not enough.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoWhat a magnificent first effort! I think it's worth developing a hot relationship with Jing and go on from there - you have a wonderful way of building a delicious erotic tension that had me squirming throughout this story. Keep up the good work!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoIt’s a rare story that gets deeply into the mind and heart of the protagonist as yours does. I felt her desperate need battling her reluctance. She was unsure of the allure of her body and had no interest in showing off...until she did. The heat in her affects the reader because we all have our hidden desires and crave someone to release us of our responsibility, to tease and seduce until we can falsely claim it wasn’t our choice of our fault.
Yet the story goes beyond the mental and emotional lust, not shying away from sensual descriptions of the subtle (and not so subtle) lovemaking. Please, write more. It’s obvious that Jing is jealous and aches for her friend. Yet Jing has Tom. This offers a new flavor of reluctant desire. How about a sequel from Jing’s point of view? Please?
ByrdMan1960about 5 years agoPlease, please, oh please continue. You really are a wonderful writer.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI need more. It looks like many of us do, yet you’ve posted nothing since your comment? Would begging help speed the process?
1whiskeyover 2 years agoreally well written. loved it. although there is obviously a second part to this ..... looking forward to it.
