All Comments on 'First Summer: My First Time'

After a THIRD mention of the word 'crutch ' I wondered ; WTF (when it comes to a couple making close sexual contact ) is a crutch ?

A beach scene as good as "From Here to Eternity?" A good steady build and a new beginning. . .

Macquarie English Dictionary "Crutch - the crotch of the human body"

No point looking at Websters

Great tension build-up.

I liked it!

Kaf: I'm a 64 yrs old scotsman living in England. You might have heard of England as its the country that invented the English language that I have spoken all my life. As a young child I used to have woollen swimming trunks that when wet used to swell in size and hang down from my crutch to my knees. I well remember the conversations about this regular phenomenon as we had council run paddling pools in those days that were not vandalised. Crutch is definitely the same as crotch. As regards the 'other mistakes' you mentioned...... I didnt notice them. I just read a very pleasant story without deeply analysing it and it was a very pleasant read.

Speedos! Macquarie Dictionary! What a give-away!

Loved it, Wonderfully detailed story of making love, not just having sex. Would've liked a bit of a flourish at the end: it finished a bit flat after the great sex.

I approve of the birth control, also comments on boys being assholes. Adds realism, makes me believe the story more.

Shameless plug: you might want to read another first time, my story "Beach Holiday", then you'll know what boardies are...

Enjoyed the story, missed my first time, wife had lots of guys, silly me I didn't realize till later. Nice story

I didn't get hung up on the strange words, which are easily figured out with some context. The important things to me are the quality of the descriptions and the plot. My penis responded positively to your story! Thanks.

Crotch, not crutch. But other than that this was a really nice story. Thank you for writing it!

It would help immensely if when writing a continuing series of stories that they be numbered. I have had to go back to the daters to try and get them into sequence.

if they were numbered it would be easier to find each,, I have to go by dates for now

I am sorry that the first few chapters aren’t numbered. The site offers a limited number of characters for a heading and I couldn’t fit a numeric system in. It also records entries alphabetically rather than in date order.

To help you, I offer the following

Chapter 1: First Summer: A Long Holiday Ahead

Chapter 2: First Summer: That Erection Will Be

Chapter 3: First Summer: My First Time

Chapter 4: First Summer: Second Cumming

Chapter 5: First Summer: Friday's Passions

After that I put the chapter numbers in the sub-description where they should be visible on a search.

Chapter 11 was accidentally mis-posted on my flatmate’s tag and can be found here https://www.literotica.com/s/first-summer-nipple-orgasm

Sweet, entertaining and arousing story with real emotions and thinking.

Just feels good and believable.

Thank you!.

I love this. It's rare that I read every word of an erotic story, because I often skip past the "irrelevant" parts, so I can get to the sexual parts. But I really love the pacing and the gradual exploration of the protagonist's awakening.

Wonderful series of stories by a wonderful writer. It is several years on, but I just want to emphasize that all the people claiming Australian and British usage is not correct are just advertising their own stupidity. The U.S. as a whole is an insular, poorly-educated culture ignorant of rest of the world. I am from the U.S. and love it, but I have also lived in other countries and traveled to many more. No well-educated person would insist that "crutch" is wrong and that the author has to use "crotch" just shows us the failure of the U.S. educational system, among other things.