Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereFinally recovering my bikini top, we headed off to the water. Half way down I had a thought, excused myself and dashed back to my bag. Finding what I needed, I tucked it in to the broad wrist band of the diver's watch I used when swimming. By the time I caught up with him he was thigh deep in the water. Coming up at a run behind, I tackled him down, dumping us both in the water. As he fell he turned toward me, so we ended up in each other's arms again.
Wonderful series of stories by a wonderful writer. It is several years on, but I just want to emphasize that all the people claiming Australian and British usage is not correct are just advertising their own stupidity. The U.S. as a whole is an insular, poorly-educated culture ignorant of rest of the world. I am from the U.S. and love it, but I have also lived in other countries and traveled to many more. No well-educated person would insist that "crutch" is wrong and that the author has to use "crotch" just shows us the failure of the U.S. educational system, among other things.
I love this. It's rare that I read every word of an erotic story, because I often skip past the "irrelevant" parts, so I can get to the sexual parts. But I really love the pacing and the gradual exploration of the protagonist's awakening.
Sweet, entertaining and arousing story with real emotions and thinking.
Just feels good and believable.
Thank you!.
I am sorry that the first few chapters aren’t numbered. The site offers a limited number of characters for a heading and I couldn’t fit a numeric system in. It also records entries alphabetically rather than in date order.
To help you, I offer the following
Chapter 1: First Summer: A Long Holiday Ahead
Chapter 2: First Summer: That Erection Will Be
Chapter 3: First Summer: My First Time
Chapter 4: First Summer: Second Cumming
Chapter 5: First Summer: Friday's Passions
After that I put the chapter numbers in the sub-description where they should be visible on a search.
Chapter 11 was accidentally mis-posted on my flatmate’s tag and can be found here https://www.literotica.com/s/first-summer-nipple-orgasm
if they were numbered it would be easier to find each,, I have to go by dates for now
It would help immensely if when writing a continuing series of stories that they be numbered. I have had to go back to the daters to try and get them into sequence.
Crotch, not crutch. But other than that this was a really nice story. Thank you for writing it!
I didn't get hung up on the strange words, which are easily figured out with some context. The important things to me are the quality of the descriptions and the plot. My penis responded positively to your story! Thanks.
Enjoyed the story, missed my first time, wife had lots of guys, silly me I didn't realize till later. Nice story
Shameless plug: you might want to read another first time, my story "Beach Holiday", then you'll know what boardies are...
Speedos! Macquarie Dictionary! What a give-away!
Loved it, Wonderfully detailed story of making love, not just having sex. Would've liked a bit of a flourish at the end: it finished a bit flat after the great sex.
I approve of the birth control, also comments on boys being assholes. Adds realism, makes me believe the story more.
Kaf: I'm a 64 yrs old scotsman living in England. You might have heard of England as its the country that invented the English language that I have spoken all my life. As a young child I used to have woollen swimming trunks that when wet used to swell in size and hang down from my crutch to my knees. I well remember the conversations about this regular phenomenon as we had council run paddling pools in those days that were not vandalised. Crutch is definitely the same as crotch. As regards the 'other mistakes' you mentioned...... I didnt notice them. I just read a very pleasant story without deeply analysing it and it was a very pleasant read.
Macquarie English Dictionary "Crutch - the crotch of the human body"
No point looking at Websters
A beach scene as good as "From Here to Eternity?" A good steady build and a new beginning. . .