All Comments on 'First Swingers Party'

I hope this is not the end

OK story, but the alcohol really stretched the suspension of disbelief. So, she had, and I counted, 10 drinks. That's 15 ounces of vodka or about half a bottle. Nobody I know can drink like that and still be conscious, let alone remember anything afterward. Try again.

Enjoyed the story of your swinging adventure, and I look forward to you continuing with the saga. Pictured myself as Mark, sharing you for the first time since marriage preparing to make you a true hot wife.

If www.literotica.com/s/first-swingers-party-2 and www.literotica.com/s/first-swinging-party are the first and second chapters of the same two-chapter story, then submit them in that pattern. As it currently stands, it looks as if they're two different versions of the same text; a reader who looks at one and not the other just sees a half-completed story (there are already too many of those here) and gives up.