All Comments on 'First Time'

Wow, the author totally confused me times with the poor spelling and incorrect words. Totally mixed up until rereading several times before I could figure out the correct word, ignoring the letters which had no relationship to the needed text.

Don't quit your day job!!

That has no idea of female anatomy: my head buries itself in your pussy lips etc then OMG you are so tight ???? Whenever we're a girl's pussy lips tight ??? Then "I push my cock further into your pussy until I meet a wall of resistance of your cherry" !!!!! Where do you think the Hymen is? Halfway down to herCervix ???? No No No it's at the Vaginal entrance, something you need to know before trying to write an erotic story. As this kind of ignorance kills a good story!!' So don't give up, just find out the facts of female anatomy first next time! Also it's buried "to the hilt" not "in your hilt!!