All Comments on 'First Time'

by Basia

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Princey1981Princey1981almost 18 years ago
Smokin!

All I can say is... WOW!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wanting more...

I enjoyed the direction your writing took in this story but it ended kind of abruptly. Great start, keep at it but really, it left me wanting more.

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