All Comments on 'First Time: A Night to Remember'

Lame story, big anti-climax when you say "oh by the way, she's a 40 year old slut". She could be his mother! Total turn-off. Also, get an editor or learn to spell.

it was amazing it got me all hot n horny, a few spelling errors but that can be expected. keep writing

It was one of those "damn if that didn't turn me on what could?" stories. Seriously that was awesome!

but honestly, it didn't really bug me because I'm a published writer and make spelling and grammar errors too just like everyone else, but Word programs normally have spell-check.

Great story. you should write one where he comes back for more and adda little twist. that'd be great! I know I would read it!

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good story but to much bad spelling you should have used your spell checker or reread it