All Comments on 'First Time and Many More Ch. 01'

by Paddyomy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Oh dear

You do realize you only need apostrophes at the beginning and end of when someone is talking and not at every sentence?

ohiorobertohiorobertover 6 years ago
wow

thats a hot story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great story so far

Small edit error. It should be discreet not discrete. Two different meanings. Hope you get this lady in bed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Fun story

Many lads with similar feelings toward older woman. Once recognized the behavior must be corrected. Too many woman ignore it and do not initiate proper training and discipline.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great start

Please keep going!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Oh you need to finish this one for sure!

Please, part two soon.

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