All Comments on 'First Time at Mardi Gras'

lady, womanperson....you are one hell of an erotic story writer, and it grieves me that you apparently hv lost interest in the genre. on the other hand, maybe that's a good sign re you and where you're at. based on the quality--use of language, scene-setting, dramatic tension, etc.--I'm guessing that you do more serious writing that brings you a paycheck now and then.

I hope that's true 'cause I wish you well.

alobar47@hotmail.com

Great story......Please continue it.............

I wish I had the nerve. But the story is sooo hot, I do hope you will someday add a second chapter.

whore

Nice story! Really enjoyed it great build up...Shame you never did more!

never to late for a part 2