All Comments on 'First Time In the Pool'

O M G ! I'm So Wett Now - This Is A

Very Sexciting Story. I Hope Part 2 Is

Ready Soon !

Great!

Very, very nice! Sexy good!

Loved your story....look forward to more

I hope so. Feel sorry for those poor kids who have to wait for the pool to open late tomorrow morning, while Rebecca punishes Melissa.

Very nice story - it caught my fancy.

The way you clump different dialogue in the same paragraph makes it incredibly difficult to read. It's hard to keep track of who's saying what and makes reading this a chore.

I would like to thank you for writing this story and tell you that it will claim a place as one of my favourite stories yet

Lovely

very sexy and well written

would love to read what happens next with Melissa, Julie, and Rebecca

So wet

All I want to do is fuck Julie in the pool so bad. Masturbating while reading this is fucking amazing! I just picture Julie finger fucking me and then eating out my pussy. I am so wet right now!