All Comments on 'First Time Swingers'

I thought this story was well-constructed and believable. I hope there’s a second part.

Great story please write the next part soon

I enjoyed the couple’s progression and their interaction with others. Well-written. Erotica isn’t usually about the genuine hard work of a relationship, but the joy of an intimate moment. This story spreads the joy!

I thought it flowed very well and was quite plausible. Average erotic content but an overall 4 plus in my mind because of the excellent character descriptions and plot build up. There are obvious follow-on stories, which should test the mettle of the author to provide more vivid erotic scenes with other couples.

*** Nice story thanks for the read.

Lovely story that actually mirror imaged a weekend that my wife and I enjoyed, any years ago.

That was also our first swap.

Be nice if you continued with how the foursome developed.

Really enjoyed the introductory story about two swinging mature couples. I just hope there will be more chapters to this erotic adventure. I'm interested to know how these two couples would evolve after exploring their sexual kinkiness. Please continue the story.

Loved the story - thanks so much -

Great story except at the hotel the author ruined everything.. . You stay in the same room and enjoy the erotic fun times together..this is more like loaning out your partner than swapping..wish it would have continued with them doing it correctly in the same room together!

To IFAFILHG, I e-mailed you privately and found out that you have never had swapping experience whereas I have. I've explained the difference to you of actual swinging/swapping and what you are describing which is cuckolding. I suggest you get some actual information before you criticize others. This story is not ruined because it is not a cuckold story.

If you are actually swapping, you pay attention to the person you are currently having sex with, not watching your mate and their current lover.

Joe, One of the advantages of our age is we no longer have to suffer fools. I wouldn’t waste time responding to the morons who feel they have to knitpick details they know nothing about.

Great story line, character development, and your description of the conflicting emotions experienced by both members of both couples. This one almost demands follow-up chapters. I’ve enjoyed many of your stories. Keep them coming!

Well written story and characters seemed to be interesting and real. The only concern I have with swinging is that if a partner finds the sex extremely better with the new partner where does that leave the marriage? There seems always the risk of destroying the marriage, just saying.

Very, very good but it could use some more descriptive sex.