by nakedsteve
I have mixed feelings about your story. I appreciate man like you that provide cocksuckers like me a hard cock to suck because you are providing a service to us, but we are also performing a service to you. There should be no money exchanged between men for cocksucking. That just makes you a hooker for gay men. I encourage you to keep letting cocksuckers feed on your cock but stop charging them just to make you feel better. Getting your cock sucked doesn't make you gay unless you are wanting to return the favor. Cocksuckers and feeders are both getting what the want and need. I did give you 5 stars for your story though and hope you continue to write.
I sucked my first cock at 15, and was soon so addicted that I have both paid to suck cocks and have been paid to suck cocks. It makes me feel a little like a whore, but I am submissive enough to do whatever it takes to get a cock in my mouth.
"my 7" now hard cock." I assume you used a measuring tape. Giving cock sizes in inches is really dumb and juvenile and I would never do it. Aside from that, there are so many errors here it renders this nearly unreadable except for a certain, small segment of readers.
"I was in the Marines, 18 yrs old, and had just arrived in San Diego," You already said that once at the beginning. No need to repeat it.
There's no dialogue. You just tell us what someone said. " He said how about if I pay you $20, it won't make you gay."
Should be, "How about if I pay you twenty dollars(questions mark) That won't make you gay."
Get an editor who can help you write properly.
Had my first experience at10yrs old. Loved it and have done it since then. I am now 85 yrs young. don't get much at all now at my age. Miss it very much.
Stories as short as this one don’t go down well with readers and they are unlikely to come back for more. You usually need a couple of pages. There really was no content at all and again you will find that’s another reason why a reader won’t return. I assume you haven’t read any, or not many, stories by good experienced writers (they may be experienced but not good) so I would suggest you do so and
Lots of guys have these experiences, Some refuse to accept being gay or Bi, But will quietly still do this. I had similar experiences and felt weird about it and it kept me from doing more despite really enjoying it. When I was in the military it could get you kicked out but had a few experiences like this and knew some guys who were gay. One wanted a long term relationship as it was "Safe" but while I enjoyed the releases and his attention to my dick, I was still freaked out about it. Now, years later I embrace that I am happily bi sexual. I love women, Love to eat pussy, and have sex with them, But man sex is much different and rewarding in its own way. Everyone should lighten up and just enjoy themselves and play safe and responsible.
Enjoyed reading about that first time - the sense of being totally overwhelmed, cock in a stranger's mouth, in paradise