All Comments on 'Fishermens' Friend'

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 9 years ago
The dialog...

....is way over the top! Too much and not at all realistic. Cut it way down. Try again.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This is really weird. Kind of pointless, I kind of rambling, very stilted writing, and just really dumb dialogue. Not to mention unreal and Irrelevant in a world of STDs...

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