All Comments on 'Fitness Model Moms Ch. 04'

I'm so glad that young Caleb and his mom have settled down together in love and lust and with their little bundle of joy. Nothing says love for your mother like fucking a baby up the same cunt you came out of. A boy's potent young balls and his mother's fertile mature womb--made for each other!

I have to say that showing things from the dead father's perspective was an interesting choice. It added an also dream like quality to the narrative, without adding the confusion that dreams tend to be associated with. Given the sheer cosmic scale the father's spirit was dealing with, it made the love story seem less important. I'm not sure if that was an intended effect, but it definitely contrasts with your other story's where the mother/son sexual relationship is held up with such importantance. I found it to be an interesting approach and encourage you to keep experimenting like this in the future.

I absolutely loved the this. Although this could have been a story on its own without the whole looking for a father/sperm donor. I absolutely loved the guilt and inner turmoil because they were family. And finally, it boiled over. This has to be my favorite mother/son love story I have read in a long while.

Beautiful.

I absolutely loved it.

More emotionally connected stories please?

They are very needed here.y5FSwr

I had a hard time with this one. I disliked Chapter 2. Although this is fiction, in real life, the son would honor his word as far as helping raise the child. As for the mother, he would tolerate her, He would recognize that she exists but he would never touch or hug her again.