All Comments on 'Five Foot Two'

by PepsiDrinker

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koinonia_92koinonia_92almost 6 years ago
Good Story

Keep the series going, I enjoyed this!

illwindillwindalmost 6 years ago

Good lord, that dialogue was just awful. I've heard better written lines in pornos. When she said something along the lines of, "I wanna suck your fuck machine" I actually burst out laughing. You might have been aiming for sexy, but you ended up hitting the bullseye on silly.

I will say I'm glad you added the fantasy tag; because the story felt wholly unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Unbelievable....

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I'm going to try and keep my stories somewhat realistic. Not every man has a 12 inch dick and not every woman has 42DD breasts. We all have flaws and we're not all perfect. I want to keep it that way in my stories unless it's relevant.

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