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Example - "Is she taking to my daughter?"

Presumably you meant ""Is HE taLking to my daughter?"

As for the myriad other errors, from your Bibliography I would have thought you'd know better!!

after the first sentence. If this is supposed to follow another story,then tell us. Otherwise, this is not worth reading.

To the anonymous commenters, thanks for reading (or trying to read).

Sorry for the confusion. I thought the title implied this was the fourth chapter of this series...

And I struggle with catching all errors. I have so far tried to avoid having other people read my stories first, but if it continues to be a problem, I will consider it.

Hope everyone else at least gives the story a try, despite the confusing title and various grammatical errors.

...I read [present tense] to fap.

I read [past tense].

I fapped.

Now voting you a '5'.

mmmmmm good old hand reading, like some of the others I came across this and did not know it was one of some.... spoilt it some what

Amazing read, with great characters, and not too long! Can't wait for the next one.

I couldn't stop reading from the first story to this one. I sincerely hope you are going to continue with this series.

I loved this story progression from the first to the last. Sincerely hope you will be getting back to this one soon!

pussy is so wet right now... that was hot

So does Winnie's Mom have a name?