All Comments on 'Fixing Jacob Ch. 04'

I can not wait to read chapter 5.Super story!Just keep writing!More dirty talk

You duplicated the end of the story, I'm sure it was a cut and paste issue. Great story though.

Going good waiting to see what happens next. You may want to reedit though, pages 4 and 5 are the same as 2 and 3.

I enjoyed your story and I look forward to the next chapter. You might want to try and get some one to help you with editing.

Please keep writing!

Loving it. So much fun.

THANKS

Yes you repeated some pages so re-edit the last couple of pages.

Looking forward to his two dates with Lizzy and Marisa.

Then he becomes the school stud.

Of course the time with his Grandmother should be exciting

Then add in his Aunt, mom's sister to the story.

Graduation and summer time fun for the new stud.

Can’t wait for dating tales. Great job.

Thanks...

I want a lot more please

Still running hot see if grandma can cool it down. *5*

This is hot. Fucking mother is a real turn-on.