All Comments on 'Flames'

Don't leave it here, this story needs finishing

Keep goin

Could I have some more please?

I added some of part 2 into this file. I'll try have that fixed. I apologize if it ruined the experience for some of you guys. It was a really dumb mistake and I should've checked the file before uploading it.

"mental DDOS attack"... yeah, you're a nerd alright. It's cool, though. Heh! (FYI, "DOS atack" is a correct analogy since that uses up machine resources [CPU cycles, usually]; but DDOS specifically hardly applies, since distraction was only coming from 1 source.)

Such a beautiful story. Doesn't feel made-up. The cuddling scene was so nice. Mmmmm.

:-)

This was a well written and well thought-out story with great character development and just the right amount of build up to make the story believable. Unfortunately, even if your intent was to leave your readers wanting more, you stopped the story way too soon. Please follow up with a second (or third, fourth, or fifth) installment!!!!

I read your bio and see a comment about being this "shy guy" in college. Apparently that works for you if you can develop such amazingly strong powers of observation about women and life in general. This script is definitely not porn, this is life and love as good as it can be. Very good story line and well written. I couldn't say a negative word about it if someone paid me!

To be as young as you might be and realize how fortunate a person can be to met, much less to intimately know any person the way you tell it, is something very few ever experience. To be able to put these feelings and graphic images into print is s talent/skill few published writers will ever achieve. To be willing to expose this side of your personality to he world proves tou can be as brave as any front line soldier in the face of battle.

BE PROUD. Perhaps you have a piece of your artwork appropriate to add in ... To also share with us.

it was a Great read,made me feel nostalgic & missing my special someone..in many ways i saw us as those characters & i liked the ending..i give ya 5 starz..great job!!

Fantastic! absolutely loved it!