All Comments on 'Flash 01: Out Of The Blue'

Enjoyed story, written like a 1950’s sci-if, fun! Looking forward to the other chapters. Thanks for writing.

Damn, love this story! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

1/5 stars. Wife was raped and is somehow made out to be the bad guy. Cameron goes from reading thoughts to fucking Dr Manhattan in 1 paragraph? Boring crap

I love most of your stuff, but even for fiction this was waaaaay over the top. Seemed pretty preposterous.

In chapter 2&3 it was nurse Lucy later it turned to nurse Judy.

A curious mix of BTB and speculative fiction. I read a lot of sci-fi growing up, so I enjoyed this a lot.

"A curious mix of BTB and speculative fiction." Not all that curious. Just a blend of sci-fi and fantasy that has seen a resurgence in the last couple of decades. Of course Edgar Rice Burroughs was into this big time over a hundred years ago. In this instance its and easy five stars.

Wife was raped an the husband is a murderer an we are meant to feel sorry for the husband wtf

This was a good story but I am not a fan of the superpowers stuff so that left me cold. With that in mind, I give the story a 3 star rating.

An interesting beginning...

...5 stars as a down-payment!

Well, a nice story with a twist of the supernatural beings helping the guy become a murderer. He knew that his wife was drugged in the beginning and had ended the affair but he could not get passed any of that. Let's see what happens in later chapters but I do hope that he is able to control himself, and is able to help his wife. Oh, and get some retribution from others that took advantage of Ginger. Oh yeah, the name of the nurse does change from Lucy to Judy.

Always amazes me in the stories like this, when a husband learns his wife is cheating, yet still goes down on her on the very day he sees her with the other man. Well she doesn't look bad or smell bad, so in I go, tongue first to slurp away.

Oh, she may have been drugged. She may have been blackmailed. But she accepted the weak assed lie, that I'm sure she knew. Then she loved it all. All the gangbangs, all the orgies, all the corporate whoring.

She may have been a bit remorseful at the end, after months and months of sex and sluting around the halls of the office. So I do find it amazing that so many defend her. Says alot about the fall of moral strength and decency we are all suffering through these days.

Good story. Is it Lucy or Judy?

This was awesome!! I gotta say Im loving this while series. I got into this from reading the justice episode which i came to because of the I need to talk storys you did. I will need to read more of the justice ones as well!! %* all around. Id give more if I could!

He was too much of a weak cuck, especially in the beginning when he first found out. But the plot is great and looking forward to reading more. Thanks,

Yes he's too much of a wimp cuck. After reading his wife's thought when she came to visit him and her thinking she can't wait to get fuck by Chad with no concern for her husband, how he was able to to communicate with her without simply telling her to fuck off is wow and he was even willing to talk it out with her. wimp cuck mc and looking at all those memories of his wife willingly gets gangbang and even humiliate him if he doesn't divorce her this guy is going to end up in the wimpiest Mc husband list in literotica.

In the beginning She got drugged, but she willingly got drugged I have to say, because she willingly went along with the douche knowing what he had in mind, so getting drugged is no excuse. And the mc says he's not stupid, but then reveals he can read minds to the doctor, then shows his abilities to read mind to a nurse he just met wow. And how he keeps visiting her, knowing exactly when he was in hospital his wife didn't even care for her, she was busy getting fuck by Chad in his home. This mc is too much of a wimp

I get a kick out of some of these comments. I’ve come to think that most of the “cuck” hate here comes from either sufferers of cucky-

mania or cuckiphobia. As for the skeptics who say ‘this is ridiculous, couldn’t happen, unbelievable, stupid’ etc, I can’t help but think they’re living in their parents’ basement, counting down the days until the release of the next “Fast & Furious”, Star Wars”, Marvel movie, or maybe the next “Matrix” or “John Wick” movies. Yet when a great fantasy story is written and presented for free? Maybe reading is just too tough for them. ?. Oh, well, my second read of this one, and it’s just as good as the first time. Thanks, ‘Tramp. Another great one, of course. Sorry for getting so long-winded. 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Great story!!! And I agree with Anonymous directly below me. No matter what happens in the story or how much burn the MC gets, there's always somebody in the comments calling him a wimp and a cuck, a whimpy cuck almost like they're pissed lol. It's probably the same dude in all the comments. Somebody that looks like Pee Wee Herman and only ever been laid by one ugly girl no one else would wanna touch

Amazing powers. Lucy became Judy. Anyway, enjoyed the story. Wanted to see Chad die in front of Ginger while she was begging for her own life.

I'm surprised at some of the comments that accuse the mc of being wimpy for not taking any action after coming to know of his wife's infidelity. But I think the mc was very clever in taking his time, planning and abiding his time. After all, what else could he have done in a no-fault state.The situation did call for being cautious, not rash.

But I think Chad's death was an easy way out. The mc should have thought of keeping him alive without any capacity to ever screw any woman again. He should have been made extremely horny and in such condition day after day with highly swollen and very painful blue balls. And screwing women was no answer. It would only increase the pain. The only way he could get relief was by fucking an animal, like a dog, sheep or pig that too in public.

This should have been the true comeuppance for a Asshole like Chad. And mc should have gone after the other Board members and dealt with them the same way as Chad.

Wow. Lot's of creativity going on in the imaginative mind if Saddle Tramp! 5 Stars and hopefully you'll be inclined to continue this story line. Thank you for sharing!!