All Comments on 'Flash 01: Out Of The Blue'

Sell it to Netflix! It's 500-times better than the woke sh*t they pay millions for!!!

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Thanks!!! 5++++/5!!

Another great story

Hi

I think the word for the story was...fun. I like a fantasy that doesn't get bogged down in too much detail. I like where this is going.

Damn! Excellent story....5 stars.

Thanx!

Loklie

Did nurse Lucy morph into nurse Judy? Did I miss something?

Anyway ***** from me.

Enjoying the story and look forward to more! One thing.. is it me or did the nurse's name change from Lucy to Judy part way through? Or were there 2 different nurses?

Well I loved it. Just hope I don't miss the follow ups. Also hope he considers that the drugs could have affected her to make her act out of her normal character. Her memories show she did love him so please take that into account.5 stars

I am guessing it is the same character, the nurse went from being named Lucy the first few pages but her name is Judy starting when Cam is leaving the hospital.

Interesting story, good to read something completely different. I hope Cam still divorces Ginger.

ST1956 rides again!

5

Nice story. Has a lot of ways to go Wackdoodle is a moron . Keep on please. Thanks

Lucy turned into Judy part way through.

Did the nurses name change from Lucy to Judy?

Another ST dud

Interesting and refreshingly different story.

Categorising something like this is always difficult as it's a story about marital infidelity with a sci-fi twist. Ignore Whackdoodle's whining, it's not like the cuckie weirdo ever has anything insightful to say.

For once, I actually agree with WhackaDumbass.

Not bad, interesting story, hope for more

but this was palatable.

Another piece of sexist crap,

4/5

I will score again after completion.

Love your stories Saddletramp. Men behave like men.

Keep up with he good work

I think he should give Ginger another chance, but I know you don't write those type of stories

And lol @ idiot with the Netflix comment. Do you even know what woke means? Dummy

Shorty of an author?? What a dumb pos haha! Probably fell asleep reading because your rotten walnut of a brain “shorty’d” out on you. What a limp excuse of a human being, you should switch out your 3 inch dic for some more grey matter

Wow! this took me places I didn't expect. You are truly an inventive author. Waiting for follow ups! 5 Stars!!!

Just one question, why did Lucy change her name to Judy?

Not sure how being a ‘shorty’ author is as insulting as that comment is supposed to be. Is it a height thing? Does Whackdoodle perhaps know you are of diminutive stature? All questions to ponder while we wait for the next instalment.

As to the story, it was fun. Didn’t we all think about powers like that when we were kids coming out of Saturday morning pictures after watching the latest episode of some low budget Si-Fi series.

Man I am loving ST’s sci fy stories

More please sir, can I have more.

Great start!

*Gasp* A Saddletramp story?!

Must....click.....

Must....rate....five....stars....

-JMFC

whackdoodle is whacked- I enjoyed your story and anxiously wait chapter 2

I stopped after 1 page. Horrible

Excellent story. Including the mysterious alien angle takes the reader far away from the usual Loving Wives motif which is quite refreshing. You have my stamp of approval. Thanks for the offering. Looking forward to the next episode.

This type of escapism is EXACTLY what is needed around here with all of the recent flood of cuck crap.

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Thanks, ST! 5 *****

Well I really liked this one.

In future, character should simply cause a fatal stroke so there is no mess and no fuss.

With great talent comes great responsibility which needs to be shared with those who are seeking it. I love this forum but sir, your talent deserves much greater reach. You should write for a greater audience and teach others while doing so.

I just love the way you tell a tale and your absence has been painful to the group as a whole. No nitpicking here sir. Be well

When I read past the midpoint of this story I was having a RAAC vibe already. I tried to assure myself nope this is Saddletramp1956 no way will he make MC a cuckold doormat with all those gangbangs and airtights Ginger did and MC knew his wife loved it. But we will see if this has a sequel.

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Though I skimmed over on some sections of the story but I did finish it. For being a fave author I still give this a higher rating.

Wrong category? I don't care - I enjoyed the story and suspect this is the set-up for a continuing series. At least I'm realizing that the "story sucks" - I didn't read it past the first sentence, 1* folks read the story first. To anyone with a brain, it's a fun story - yeah people die, but maybe it should have been in Fantasy/Sci-Fi but do read it! You'll like it.

I have to love your devious mind. I just hope that it isn't too long before we see the next chapter!

Great read.

Nurse Lucy/Judy......makeup your mind!

Good story but I thought he was going to hook up with nurse Lucy, who is Judy and where did she enter the story?

More a sci-fi story than LV, but a good story. One comment about the outcome of a divorce: Ginger was working for a financial service company and Cam was in IT. Story does not get into any differences in salaries and benefits. I recognize that an author's universe is different than ours, but a divorce in the real world would have split Cam's marital assets, but would also have split Gingers. There would be no alimony and no child support, and so divorce would simply have basically left the two as if they had been single. I mention this because that fact bothered me as I wondered why Cam did not divorce immediately.

Absolutely fantastic. F#&$ Whackdoodle. This was very entertaining and 5* worthy, which is what I gave it.

I enjoyed this story a lot. Thank you! 5 stars. Looking forward to more.

OK Sy-fi story but no way should there be any raac. Blow her up as well.

Come on Saddle.... You are a way better writer than this. Of course, this is in the WRONG category so I agree with whackdoodle. Sci-fi and fantasy were never my type stories. ... And in this case, there were many holes, you didn't need aliens to make this happen. Plus with questions left to be answered, another chapter is needed. When did nurse Lucy become nurse Judy? Definitely not my cup of tea

I really liked the overall premise of this ... alien encounter? But... one thing really got to me. That this guy, that proclaims himself NOT a willing cuck, goes down on his cheating wife, right after seeing her getting finger-banged in Chad's car? No way in hell would most men do that, despite his supposedly 'super-sensitive' nose.

Later on, he destroys his shower with a bolt of lightning or something, then a day or two after that, he gets up and takes a shower. Admittedly, their little condo might have two bathrooms, but for him to just pretend like the destroyed shower is not an issue, not even explain it to his wife? Anyway, interesting story, but it definitely reeks of possible reconciliation, using that old standby, "it's okay dear that you fucked all those men and gave them all three holes, because you were blackmailed." I'm really hoping she doesn't have that get out of jail free card waiting to be played.

Later, but the steering wheel was locked.

Your stories are fun to read the best possible compliment a reader can give you

Did the nurse change names from Lucy to Judy? Or where there two nurses?

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Other than that I enjoyed it. Good story.

Didn't you already write this story ?

A great read, surprised to find a sci fi story on this site. Really enjoyed it. Only three comments so far, will have to check back to see what kind of outrage this generates. I get a kick out of all the comments on stories that claim that this or that could never happen, as if this is a site for documentaries. Thanks for sharing this and keep up the good work.

Is it Nurse Lucy or Nurse Judy? Just seeking clarification and understanding. I generally like most of what you share with us. I will hold my ratings until the story is completed, but enjoying it thus far. Not everything has to be BTB, not RAAC. Reconciliation With Some Compromise appeals to some.

Many times the authors here have an intro that explains the "boundaries" a reader should have when reading their stories. Unfortunately, many times they use it as an excuse for any faults/shortfalls may exist in their story or capabilities. You have such and intro, standard for all your stories. What sets you apart as a top tier writer in LW is your intro is not a boundary but a jumping off point for the reader of your stories. They have some roots in experiences that exist in all of our psyche but your imagination transports us to s different reality where fact, fiction, and fantasy are blended together. On behalf of all readers, THANK YOU for that and the hours of entertainment you give us! 5*

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Note to self-if I ever develop super human abilities, STFU. 😂

Great story and welcome back Mr Saddletramp. Missed you and your great writing. Hope all is well with you and keep

up your amazing work.

Good story -- but is it Judy or Lucy??? Otherwise - not sure how the plant get's into dna changing devices. Another of the Plant Gods messed up experiments?

Lucy became Judy?

Other than Lucy becoming Judy, it is a great read so far. 5

With all your writings and support help, how did Lucy become Judy?

Well that was a helluva lot of fun.

Lego. True

I liked it. The story had a lot of things going on but personally I like Science Fiction angle. And I like the revenge part. Can the husband ever forgive the wife? Only if somehow one of the new abilities is time travel. Go back into Gingers memory at the point where Chad tells her about being a company whore, but instead have the husband there in person so he can best the crap out of the boss. Thanks for the story.

story is very good but when did nurse Lucy change her name to Judy

Always a good time

5 stars as usual and keep this one going to where ginger does fully recover and somehow their marriage survives and get gets his revenge on the company execs

Great story, can’t wait to see how this progresses. Thanks for writing and thanks for sharing

Wow a great start to what promises to be an exciting story. Can hardly wait to read about the revenge that is yet to come for the board of directors. You appear hesitant about your placement of this story, But you also chose the right catagory for the beginning. If Literotica had an LW/ SCI-FI catagory it would be perfect. Will keep looking for the finish .

What was the nurse called?

Completely unrealistic. I mean everybody on Literotica knows there is no such thing as a normal sized penis. In cuck stories they are always tiny and in all the rest the hero has a foot long monster. The rest was pretty believable, though.

Looking forward to the next in the series...

Kind of a dark "Marvel"wotld thong. With the same kind of nonsensical rationale. Why does Cam continue visiting the cheap whore in the hospital? Her actions and attitude absolutely betrayed her protestations of love for Cam. Her thoughts during her visits to the hospital should have removed any doubt of his determination to divorce. Come on ST, don't try to wrangle any type of raac out of this. Cam has the recordings of her memories of her gang bangs.

keep it coming want to see what he does to the board and others that had his wife

Great story from a gifted writer. Eagerly awaiting further installments. Thanks for the story, the effort and time to write it.

Huh? This is the worst thing by you, yet, and trust me...that took some doing.

Excellent story. Love your universe. Keep them coming. 5 big ones!!

As always, an excellent story, told in an exciting and thrilling way. I'm just always amazed where you get your ideas from. I'm glad when I read your name, because then I know that the day is saved in terms of stories. Thank you for your work!! 5/5 !!!

Another great entry (5 stars) into a another interesting tale.

Thank you, Saddletramp!

Oh, I slightly disagree with the two visitors: the guy who uses two people to try to kill someone is at that moment also a combatant. And is it Lucy or Judy?

@Legio_Patria_Nostra: love the Netflix comment!

Well that was entertaining!

Thanks ST!

Lucy/Judy — oops!

Fun story. Husband could have been more forgiving. She easily could have gone to jail and hated being used/blackmailed. Still, thanks for putting this in the LW section rather than the SCIFI as I would never have found it.

Yeah, I have to agree with his alien co-conspirators. He should have made Chad suffer for a lot longer than a few minutes.

Very well done. Excellent! I hope there is a chapter 2 to deal with the Board of Directors. I wanna give this 25 stars but you'll have to settle for 5 BIG FUCKING STARS!

Cross between Cyclops and Jane Grey

I undressed, my average-sized cock at full mast, and got between her legs. I kissed the inside of her thighs while checking out her wet pussy. I didn't see or smell anything that suggested she had been with another man, so I decided to take the plunge. Like I said, I may be "average," but I'm not stupid. hmm does this not make this guy a willing cuckold? i mean he knows where her pussy has been and he goes down on her. ew thats just gross

oop i hit page 2 lol u have seen The Dead Zone before?

I woke up sometime in the night and heard low whispers in the room. I couldn't make out what was being said, but I clearly heard two separate voices. It was quite dark, with the only light coming from the equipment next to my bed. I looked around and thought I saw two shadowy figures at the foot of my bed.

"Hello?" I asked quietly. They turned their heads to look at me and I saw two sets of strangely-shaped yellow eyes staring back. I felt a strange chill go up my spine. "Who are you?" I asked. I never got an answer as the figures dissolved into thin air right before me. Startled, I hit the call button. A nurse came in a few seconds later. read that before line for line

Never disappointed in a saddletramp story.

Only gave you a 4 star. Waiting for "more to come" for a better/worse rating. Hope we don't have to wait for too long before chapter 2.

As always, a good read.

I loved it. You the man, as they say. 7 stars because it wasn't long enough, and they won't change the creating system. The Bear approves. Can't wait for the next part. I do feel a little sorry for the wife; we'll have to see how it works out, but as they say 'if you can't do the time, don't do the crime.'

The BEAR

Loved it as usual….SK,

Another great addition to the Plant, taking a turn and spinning off into a different direction. Nurse Lucy named changed to Judy as the Cam is checking out of the hospital.

You’re one hell of a writer and I look forward to the next chapter!

what can develop.....imagination works overtime and overload. TK U MLJ LV NV

this is why i dont read scifi on this site. put scifi tag when its scifi so i can skip it next time please

Great fantasy story. The nurses name was Lucy, not Judy.

Not everyone reacts to drugging and blackmail. He should hear Ginger out, fully. She had stopped.

5/5

Son of a birch. Great change from the normal. A really great read and I hope you continue it on till the end. You sir are one of our greatest contributors here. Thank you sir keep up the great writing!.

Nice to see you back Saddletramp!

ST, the makings of another great series. Like Justice O, MMAS, & the Cheating Zone. Well done sir! Keep on rockin! 5*

Kinda agree with others. Kinda sci-fi but good . Did have the cheating whore and all . So now it should go to sci-fi category now. I hope you have it all written out and will do a chapter a day . Holding off on score to see how fast they come

Why does he not join the Police Force as no criminal will be able to get away with anything.

Exceptional story and I look forward to more.

Generally I am all for his stories but I couldnt get far through this one.