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youdonwannaknowyoudonwannaknowabout 16 years ago
Amazing!

And I know you dont need this right now, but I liked the other storyline better. If you ever feel upto writing it, please do. It'd be very welcome.

As for this storyline, its pretty godo, and I'm looking forward to the story. But I still say you'd have done better with the former.

janetcjanetcabout 16 years ago
loved it

Can't wait for the next chapter. I love reading about firemen.

Marines_Lady_15Marines_Lady_15about 16 years ago
It's a twist, but I like it

Well, it's a difference from the other version, but I think you'll be ableto make it work! Can't wait for the next chapter*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
keep going

good start and please keep going can't wait to read more!

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