All Comments on 'Flashover Pt. 04'

Slowly but surely, Sean will find the arsonist!

5

You have a talent for writing.

Very good story, moving right along and now another potential informant. You can just feel the small town atmosphere as the chief walks around. Not much action yet by you cab be sure it's coming. 5stars all the way...............

This was mostly an interlude. Sean and Maggie relationship and Sean getting his computer system. One of the homeless will provide a clue, hopefully next chapter.

*****Good read getting more interesting every page. Thanks for sharing.