All Comments on 'Flat Chested Alyssa'

Nice love story. I too love small breasts. Even after two kids my wife's still look like the did when we met 35 years ago.

An altogether charming story. One significant reservation. The author should either get an editor or take instruction on what constitutes a sentence. Commas cannot substitute for periods.

Good story otherwise.

Another great story!

5

As always, a very good story. Thanks for your time and imagination.

But when the sex happens, it just happens. No slowness. No reluctance by anybody. No step by step buildup. No excitement.

Well written, but the sex is just sex; it not erotic -- for me at least.

Disappointing.

Great story again from the master. Really enjoyed it and I didn't think it was too long. Quit apologizing! I like the development and extra background you include. It makes the story more real at least to me.

As usual the "Anonymous" grammar police had to comment. For what we pay for the entertainment on this site I don't expect Hemingway, Clemens or Shakespeare. Just me I guess. Thanks for sharing your talent and creativity.

5 stars

Cheers

SAGE

He should have listened to his mother and told her how he felt, now he will always be in second place behind Jean-Luc.

As always a great story. I agree he should have told her before she left how he felt.

Good story. Every woman being bisexual took me out of the story a bit, but not too much.

What a beautiful story, well written and presented.

Makes it difficult when characters have similar names.

Very nice ... loved it!

A wonderfully beautiful story — Thank You for sharing!!!

With all the references to his hot sister, her cameltoe, and the mention of jerking off with mom's panties, I thought it was going to turn into an incest story.

Lovely story

5*

AS I expected Another great story, and another 8. They're going to have raise those stars to accommodate your stories. For now, it's on to the next one.

I enjoyed the premise of the story, but there were a few glaring issues I found difficult to ignore. There are a lot of run on sentences that shift from one thought to another. This created parts of the story that seem rushed and incomplete. You seemed to focus primarily on Alyssa’s small breasts, and you missed every opportunity create a depth to her character and her other characteristics. — in my opinion, a story is made compelling by creating a clearer image of your characters and their motivation. If they lack depth, then the things they do or go through don’t have much meaning. — I really wanted to enjoy the story more than I did. There was slight build up in different areas that ended up fizzling out. 3 stars.

A nice story, a bit of a bumpy road but it had a happy ending. Thank you for posting it.

Alyssa talks way too much about the sex she has had and what she likes about sex with other guys.

Loved the story

Sorry, but the explanation of the story and the afterthought, kind of ruined it for me. These are basically fantasy, bur t interjecting a separate reality blows the whole thing. I refuse to grade a story on grammar unless it's so bad I can't read it. Agree with some comments that the sex was a bit bland, lacked eroticism.