by CalliopeTheThird
to your opening comment.
Infidelity doesn't offend me. What offends me are people like you who believe that it is OK to have it unpunished.
Whole human race is spending lot of effort to bring Assholes to justice.
If most of the people are like you... WHY?
Society must be crazy to try to punish shitheads... according to you, any way.
After all, most of the amateur writers write what they believe.
PS: You just have to look at their stories to see what their preoccupation is!
The usual crap! At least you were so clever and excluded rating. Save a lot of frustration!
I had only met Zac once - a well-mannered young black guy was about all I recalled of the meeting.
Gonna go out on a limb here and say clearly this was the last train to cucksville after that, now let the husband find out what a cheating twat she is and divorce her.
That said, I stopped reading at that line above but I'm guessing I havent missed the mark by much. If I am wrong someone please slap me with a rubber dildo.
Authors who do not allow scoring have a pretty good idea that the product they're putting out is basically worthless. You made the right decision on this one.
You knew you shouldn't have done it? And did Steve take his having a new baby brother as badly as Sam took finding out you were pregnant? By the way where do you live now, not with Steve and no longer at your old home with Sam?
What's wrong with these people, IT'S A STORY! Concern yourself with your own morality in the REAL world. They'd probably get offended reading a shopping list.
It was an enjoyable read
Alapvetően egy sz@r történet,igaza van az előttem szóló véleményezőnek, jó hogy nincs csillag mert még az egyet is meggondoltam volna adni! Szokjon le az írásról,főleg ilyenről...!!!