All Comments on 'Flea Market Find'

While it did seem to end rather abruptly, I thought it was another great story and one I will probably re-read at some point in the future. I understand you have to pick somewhere for the story to end, but I can’t help but feeling there were questions left unanswered. Maybe I’ll feel differently when I re-read it.

I look forward to your next story.

You could easily build on this story!

I would like to see part two, maybe three years out,

Great story but could do with at least a few more paragraphs to round off the story.

This is a big departure from your other stories in that it doesn't seem to have the kind of closure your other ones have. I'd love to see you cover the growth of, and relationship with Dulcina and her mother leading up to the marriage. Perhaps along with whatever happens with his previous children and his flea market kids.

Great story! I couldn't put it down! I hope another chapter to develop step daughter and stepfather's relationship! I highly recommend! In Montana!