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All Comments on 'Fleeting Encounters'

by eyToad

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beasthunterbeasthunteralmost 13 years ago
Well Crafted

Good idea, logical progression, and no distracting editorial problems. I thought the relationship between the protagonist and the ghost needed more development. His decision to suicide seemed a bit abrupt.

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