All Comments on 'Flight of the Shikra'

by CriticalThinker

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wonderful

one of the best erotic stories i have ever read.Highest level

I hope to read more

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too long

Sorry, but this may well be a great story, but it is just far too long.

If you were to bost it in chapters of, perhaps, 4 - 6 pages I would hav been happy to read it.

CriticalThinkerCriticalThinkerabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Thank you anonymous, you made my day. Yes, there will be more and I hope you will enjoy them just as much.

TheShelbyTheShelbyalmost 4 years ago

it was great overall, but in the middle it got somewhat lenghty but np cos otherwise it was great!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Complaining a story is too long?

Sorry. I would much rather a story be offered in one piece rather than chapters. How many stories here have been abandoned by authors for whatever reason before they are concluded. No law says you have to finish a story at one sitting. Read a few pages and then come back to it later..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. I learned a lot about Indian culture and even about the fine arts. The only thing that confused me was the headers. When a name is used as a header in a story, usually what follows is narrated by that character. In this story it was the opposite.

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