by CriticalThinker
one of the best erotic stories i have ever read.Highest level
I hope to read more
Thank you
Sorry, but this may well be a great story, but it is just far too long.
If you were to bost it in chapters of, perhaps, 4 - 6 pages I would hav been happy to read it.
Thank you anonymous, you made my day. Yes, there will be more and I hope you will enjoy them just as much.
it was great overall, but in the middle it got somewhat lenghty but np cos otherwise it was great!!!!!
Sorry. I would much rather a story be offered in one piece rather than chapters. How many stories here have been abandoned by authors for whatever reason before they are concluded. No law says you have to finish a story at one sitting. Read a few pages and then come back to it later..
Great story. I learned a lot about Indian culture and even about the fine arts. The only thing that confused me was the headers. When a name is used as a header in a story, usually what follows is narrated by that character. In this story it was the opposite.