All Comments on 'Flights of Fancy'

Great up until the decision was made to destroy the key. Then just finished with a rushed overview? What a shame.

Loved it. Very well written.

Well, this was change and a very enjoyable one. the sex scenes were as good as ever but the tale they were wound into was really imaginative. Keep it up!

Way too much setup and exposition.

Nice story, but if the key Mark has is the same as the one Beatrice had, only in different points in the timeline, wouldn't Mark's key also be destroyed because from its point of view it was smashed in the past?

Great story, well told!

Great story! Love the buildup and plot twists!

Wonderful story. Time travel is hard to keep straight. But I was waiting for Mark visiting Abbie again about 10 years after Lizbet was born because he had to impregnate Abbie so he could be born.

Great premise for a story. Loved the telling of the tale, without the total physical attributes of the characters, allowing the reader to determine their looks. Nicely done!

Lovely story. Would like to hear more about the trips they made together after Beatrice moved in. 5/5! I think every reader except Anonymous realizes they did not destroy the key.....

This was a wonderful story!

Absolutely fantastic, well done. New exciting, this should go mainstream not erotic something else instead. The writer is really gifted

well written, l enjoyed the journey

Wow, what an incredible story. I love science fiction and this just blew me away. Your writing is very good, you should be writing full length books. I know that I would buy them even without the sex. Many science fiction books have about the same sex in them or the eluding to it. Take Robert Heinlein as an example. I wouldn't want you to quit writing here as I love your other stories also. Thanks again for writing it's much appreciated 😊 o

great start and middle part, weak ending :(

4/5

Must agree with the below comment of a Fantastic start but the story ultimately ended very flatly. Great work and thanks for sharing with us. 4/5

Oh, where to start . . . All great stories have three basic parts; the beginning, the middle and of course the ending. You have done a superlative job on all three counts. Since I'm an avid reader of the science fiction genre, the beginning was the hook as it so reminds me of the writings of Philip K. Dick. The middle narrative obviously does a good job in satisfying the basic requirements of this the incest category. Now, the ending. The previous comments seem to demonstrate a basic lack understanding of the many conundrums related to the concept of time travel. As written, I feel it ties up all the various aspects of this story as neatly as possible. Plus, it gave a nice pleasant feel to it. Great work. Keep it up

OH by the way. From your vernacular I'll assume you are from the UK