All Comments on 'Flowers in the Park Ch. 05'

I think she'll cave by Sunday evening!

5

Narrative a little bland in spots and pace really slow, but still engaging. 4*

I'm now also wondering if they will make it through the day of not seeing each other. And also making through the weekend apart. One of the two will be getting five pounds of M&M's. Loving your story. Can't wait to read the next part.

I'm now also wondering if they will make it through the day of not seeing each other. And also making through the weekend apart. One of the two will be getting five pounds of M&M's. Loving your story. Can't wait to read the next part.

There is nothing here in 5 chapters, why is this on an erotic site? This is not even crawling let alone pedestrian. zero interest in reading further. Are they even alive any longer?

Nice writing but didn't really move the story along much. Instead of so much talk about the future it might be time to move the characters along onto that future. 4 stars

I'm loving this story! Not every story needs to have sex in it. Many stories that I read I actually skip over the sex parts. After a while it gets very boring and bland. 5*

THESE CONVERSATIONS WITH LORI ARE FUCKING ANNOYING!! JUST DRAGGING THE STORY WHICH IS ALREADY SLOW AND BORING!!

BOTH MANCRAZY BITCHES SHOULD FOCUS ON THE KIDS!!