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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The recap at the top of this installment was really unnecessary. You write well but the story seems just plodding along. 4 stars

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 1 year ago

Starving to death from spoon feeding us - start using a shovel! LOL 5*

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I'm really enjoying it, but I find authors who write one-page chapters instead of chapters that come at obvious breaks in the story to be a problem. Since so many of those types of stories are never finished here I usually read the first chapter and then pick up the story again when the author has finished it. This one I read the first chapter and then waited until you got to chapter 13 to start reading.

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