by PapaRomantic
I've loved each one. I can't wait to see what will happen in the end. I could only give it five stars. Because they don't have ten. But I would give each one ten stars in I could.
You're doing this well - still a little Hallmark Cards/Disneyfied for how quickly they resolved the conflict, but it's a step in the right direction - and your name is Papa Romantic, so, well done.