All Comments on 'Flowers in the Park Ch. 16'

Wonderful ending!

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Enjoyed this from the first page.Thank you very much!!

I rarely follow stories in parts as too many times they are unfinished. This was a beautiful conclusion to a lovely story!!

I loved the ride as well.

Enjoyed the series, thanks for sharing!!

Bravo!

Lovely ending to a great story. You did a great job - thank you

So sweet I think I might have just developed diabetes

Excellent

Great story loved it. I’m sad to see it end.

Enjoyed the whole series. Great work.

I don't like this part. An epilogue might be necessary: Yes, they married. Yes, they became farmers. Yes, they had kids. But the text doesn't flow. It is just an info dump with some color on it.

Bravo! This is probably the best series I have ever had the pleasure to read on Literotica. Thank you so much! 5 stars

I was surprised to see this pop up today as I thought the last chapter ended with some finality. That said, this epilogue didn’t screw anything up, so I’ll stick with my traditional 5* for the series. LOL!

Great story! Write more like this!